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Post by meditating4life on Mar 21, 2005 3:24:51 GMT
Deceived by Laura
A poem for Beast Boy and Raven fans.
I thought for hours, why we aren’t together already, and the only reason is our past.
We’ve both been deceived now,
We’ve both been lied to.
We’ve both loved another.
Forget about him,
Forget about her.
For we’d be living in the past if we didn’t.
They told us they’d love us.
They told us they’d always be there.
I guess they lied.
We almost destroyed this city trying to find love,
When it was right in front of us.
Now it is clear that we are meant to be.
I know how you feel,
I’ve been there before.
Let’s put it behind us,
Because I secretly love you.
My heart is begging you’ll say yes to just one date.
With All my Love.
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Post by meditating4life on Mar 21, 2005 3:25:08 GMT
Please don't steal and tell me what you think.
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Post by Guestazndragonz on Mar 21, 2005 5:48:07 GMT
kewl....interesting....and what do you mean by stealing....like as in taking it without the author's permission...or taking it and not saying that it's by somebody else??....lol...there's a poem on some fanfic it's quite kewl....i'll post the link....if i can find it....
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Post by meditating4life on Mar 21, 2005 20:31:02 GMT
both. i posted it on a few other boards, and last board, the last post wasnt too good....at all. glad this one got a better comment. thanks.
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Post by Guestazndragonz on Mar 22, 2005 2:21:58 GMT
lol...more like the only one so far..lol..np....
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2ofaKind
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Post by 2ofaKind on Mar 25, 2005 20:18:07 GMT
That's a really sweet poem... I think you have a way with knowing the characters...  |
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Post by meditating4life on Mar 26, 2005 0:11:28 GMT
aww, thanks. ;D so far only one person really hated/was confused with it, but everyone else has loved/liked it.
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Post by Raventhorn on Mar 26, 2005 1:34:27 GMT
That was alsome i write poems so i know. But it is a bit too lovey dovey for me to even think of takeing but it is still cool  |
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Post by meditating4life on Mar 26, 2005 23:22:18 GMT
Thanks! ;D
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Post by RAVEN IS MY GF on Mar 30, 2005 1:45:00 GMT
i think its really insanly stupid
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Post by huh on Mar 30, 2005 23:49:07 GMT
it was ok, but doesnt B.B. in love with Terra?
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Post by Sahriou of OA on Apr 3, 2005 20:54:07 GMT
<to: Huh> No..BB had a CRUSH on Terra...Terra didn't like him in that way..but WAS willing to take it to the next level....<thank god for Slade> ^_^ <To: RAVEN IS MY GF> Thant's your opinion..however...I..think it's a great poem. Especially since I'm a BBxRae shipper. I even have my own Message Board s4.invisionfree.com/Opposites_Attract/index.php?act=idx |
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Hi I am Kurokawa!Whats up?!
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Post by Kurokawa on Apr 30, 2005 23:03:56 GMT
[glow=purple,2,300]That peom is so kewl  I loved it![/glow] |
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Post by bb lover on Jun 30, 2005 18:54:32 GMT
it was ok, but doesnt B.B. in love with Terra?    |
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Post by ducky on Jul 8, 2005 0:55:15 GMT
I liked the poem, you have a way with words
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I loved it![/glow]
